Here's me NOT being emo and pissed over it:
Well, sorry for that reaction, but I just snapped. Anyways, I wrote that when I wasn't as good at writing as I am now. Don't get me wrong the script is pretty funny, just for some reason when I execute the script as a video, it NEVER turns out how I picture it in my head when I do NOTHING wrong. The voice acting is pretty decent, the music goes with the situations, and I have good camera shots. So, in conclusion, the problem comes down to the script...
...OK, the problem is that certain characters can't interact to create funny situations. Such as, Ike, a serious guy, and Snake, the kill-happy guy. But, I guess you can consider the video a "test" (or the proper term, Pilot Episode) of how they interact with each other. I'm THINKING of rewriting the first part and maybe make the dialog a bit more witty...
...BUT as I continue working on the episode it seems to get funnier as it goes along. So, I'll just keep it as it is. Sorry about that, but I really needed to get that off my chest (especially the first paragraph, lol).
At least from here I can only get better ;)
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